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The Life of Mag Flamequill

The coming of age ceremony is tomorrow. Participants will take their birth-feathers and soar gracefully into the sky, cheered on by their proud friends and relatives. But what if you're Mag Flamequill, the bird-woman with a fear of heights?


Page 50- Mag used stick!

March 1st, 2010, 6:11 pm

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Author's Comments:

Reply bucky-b, March 1st, 2010, 6:11 pm

Not sure about the panel layout on this one. Might change it, but everything else looks OK. I think...
^_^

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User's Comments:

Reply moe2311, March 1st, 2010, 7:48 pm

OW! that looks like it hurt on both sides!

Reply winzrella, March 2nd, 2010, 10:05 am

No problem with the paneling here. It works :)
The first panel is great. The angle is cool and the expression of the pig is priceless.
The second panel might have worked better if Mag's hands would have been comletely streched out. Now it seems like she's putting no power at all in the hit.
Oh and, is she actually hitting by using only one hand? I looked trough the panels and which hand was shown in each and I really couldn't figure out how she handled the stick.

Other than that the page is great :)

However, sorry, but I'm not really able to point out what to do better (continuation to my previous comment). I just think the legs looked a bit twisted, but since I'm no better in doing such an angle I don't know how to advice you ^^'

I hope my comment on this page makes up for that.

Reply bucky-b, March 4th, 2010, 7:04 am

@Moe- Yep, I imagine it did XD And now she's stickless!
@winzrella- I imagined her to be holding the stick somewhat like a bat- with two hands. Actually some of the panels have been redrawn but lack of time caused me to leave others as they were.
Lazy me... XD But I'm glad the paneling is OK!

Reply bucky-b, March 5th, 2010, 6:52 pm

Well, you remember I said I re-did the last page, right? Panel 2 on this page is actually from the page that I re-did. I was playing with the layout and thought it would look nice here. The two panels below that I've been thinking about re-doing but life's been getting in the way lately. Excuses, I know XD
Normally I'm more of a perfectionist when it comes to correcting mistakes, but I'd rather put up the weekly comic and correct it later. Yikes, seems I've just written an essay here XD
But anyway, I do appreciate mistakes being pointed out, so thanks^_^

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